Thursday, March 22, 2012
Summary
"The allegory of the cave" start off with a dark scene.Their in a den that's pitch black and Prisoners that are chained.So they can't see what's going on around them or behind them.Theres a fire burning in back of the them creating shadows. The prisoners didnt know the difference between the shadows and Image of the item in front of them.One of the prisoners escape in runs to the light. At first the light started hurting him eventually over time he adopt to the light.He started seeing the shadows for what they really are.Having his I open for the first time he wants to enlighten the other prisoner about what's he seeing.He wants to share this information with the other.The other prisoner reject what he was saying because they can't see the world in his eyes.They ended up killing him at the end
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I believe that your main idea it is not clear. It is just saying the beginning of the story, and it does not say what the story is about. Your important supporting ideas are states correctly, and you have some of the unimportant ideas in your summary like this one “they ended up killing him at the end. I will say that you did not put it in you on words I see the same words the teacher put on the board. As I see your spelling and your grammar are good. You have it in a good organization as the original one. There is not personal opinion on it.
ReplyDeleteYou are a good writer but I think you have to put it in your own words.